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Eva's Song
Contributed by
DarkSoulAngel
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Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
ThankYouPoems
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"Evas Song"
I lost you so long ago. But you had a baby boy. He left you. They called you names. They made you leave. And what you left is be hind was I. I was left being to fight on my own. Find out things on my own.
To learn that my mother is a back stabbing little *****. To learn that my parents have lied to me all my life. To be pushed around and not have someone to run too to hide.
I heard them talk bad about you. I stood up for you and got pushed aside. I never stopped loving you. I missed you so much.
Now Im 16 and have already tried to end my little life. I see you.
You who have fought to live. You who had to leave me. You who where pushed around. You who was called the names. You who where left with a baby to rise. You who is my hero.
They who dont want me to be like you have spoken to late.
I want to be you. I want to be your sister. I want to be in your life. I want to save you from hell. I want you to come home.
All I hear is I need. Well I need is you I need you back home. I need my hero back. I need to be helped though these years. I need the girl that use to save me from the dark. I need my cuz back. I need you.
You taught me my music. My life style. My looks. My out look on life. My love for books.
I dont care if you have a little boy out of wedlock. I dont care if you have a problem. I dont care if you have to move to Germany. I dont care if you have to leave VA and never come back.
All I care about is and worry about is. Is she ok? Is she safe? Does she have food? Does she have love? Does she have a home? Does she need me like I need her? When will I see her next?
And that is that
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2004-09-15 22:17:01] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Eva's Song
(User Rating: 1 ) by teagy03 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:48:26 PM AEST (User
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Your poem is great. When life gets in your way, or people do, I also resort to poetry, and base it on me. I love the way you make it personal, like keeping facts about your age, and names in there. I tend to do the same. Please check out Know It All Shrink, and see what I mean.
Love the poem.
Teagy |
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