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im gonna take all your pain away
Contributed by
serena
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:17:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I watched as the dark rich blood dripped down your neck,
Satanic enjoyment takes over me,
I long to hear your cries of pain and agony once again,
I am bleeding for you in the inside,
The colors' been drained,
For love is a ***** curse, a fiery pit in which fool's fall,
Chained to your thoughts and nailed to my own insecurities,
I still yearn for more, more of your blood, more of your tears,
I bathed in your stream of blood
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serena
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2004-09-15 22:17:14]
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Re: im gonna take all your pain away
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:30:54 PM AEST
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Bro this is great! Bravo!
please comment on my work too
summer |
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Re: im gonna take all your pain away
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 10:31:02 PM AEST
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| how sweet of you to do so... |
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Re: im gonna take all your pain away
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by _Raspberry_ on
Wednesday, 27th October 2004 @ 10:17:55 AM AEST
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| Wow, this has been my first time reading you, and I am addicted. Very good write! |
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