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Night
Contributed by
aspenglow
on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 11:54:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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Darkness falls, and night begun,
voices still but lingering on.
Promises made, wishes and dreams,
beautiful maidens, nobel knights,
lovers thoughts, and sweet delights.
Tease the mind, move the heart.
The voice whispers, memories stirred,
but love remains a forgotten word.
But in the mind, and in the soul,
cries out to the light, from the darkness,
where have you gone.
The answer teases from the wind,
I have not gone....I linger still,
just beneath your window sill.
Open the window, and all is gone,
whispers from the soul within,
crying out to leave and return,
not to wander and never to yearn.
Where has that of my heart gone,
why have I stayed on so long,
after the dance has ended,
music faded, where has my
love gone.
Copyright ©
aspenglow
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2004-09-15 23:54:20]
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Re: Night
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by Bruce on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:11:40 AM AEST
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| beautiful |
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Re: Night
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 12:53:32 AM AEST
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A bit sad but the beauty of your writing is awesome.
A a masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
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Re: Night
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:29:43 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed its read:-)venkat |
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Re: Night
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by WinterFawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:33:27 AM AEST
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Very beautiful poem. But the last stanza is absolutely breathtaking!...Stirs sad emotions....Excellent piece.
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Re: Night
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:09:41 AM AEST
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Awww Chris...this is lovely and so touching....
The love will return some day and the music will play again...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Night
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:33:56 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem, as always from your heart. |
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Re: Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 08:01:56 AM AEST
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This is breathtakingly beautiful, my friend. I, too, love the last verse.
Wishing you love, laughter and rainbows of delight.
Rita |
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Re: Night
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by Kie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:03:35 AM AEST
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You have a natural graceful elegance that flows from you into your poetry. It is soft and beautiful to read. Very soothing as well.
Your poem had a sad melancholy feel to it and I tell you honestly that I found it exquisite to read.
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Re: Night
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 06:42:34 PM AEST
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truely lovely, great choice of words, wonderfully flowing... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Night
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 07:59:52 PM AEST
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Oh Chris, that was a lovely poem, but so sad somehow. I've been gone for a whole week, where did all your poems go? I surely did miss your humor.
Did you have to empty your poem cart?
So nice to be able to read your poems again my friend.
Hugs
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Re: Night
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 08:39:58 PM AEST
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Awesome poem, Chris. I have truly enjoyed reading your work. You have some really great stuff here. Thanks for sharing.
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