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I lost My Breath
Contributed by
pixie
on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:44:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I remember when I lost my breath,
Was feeling quite windswept,
World was spinning far to fast,
I was flung into the horrors of my past.
Surrounded by demons spitting fire,
My need for help was desperate & dire,
I sank lower into the dark wasteland,
Could no longer keep hold of your hand.
I couldnt see for all the smoke,
My lungs were filled I began to choke,
My head was going slowly underwater,
Mum & Dad nearly lost their only daughter.
But then a light appeared in front of my face,
It took me to the most beautiful place,
Right in the warmth of my lovers arms,
I knew that youd love me & protect me from harm.
With you I feel so safe & so warm,
Sheltered from the wind blowing & the storm,
I had been given another chance to live,
I know that chances arent that easy to give.
Love prevailed & it shown me the way,
I am thankful to you every single day,
You gave me back my eternal breath,
Shown me that there was something left.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-09-16 11:44:01]
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Re: I lost My Breath
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:11:02 PM AEST
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a scary time, but the outcome was beautiful, its so sweet you have someone to catch you when you fall, so very dear, deeply felt, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I lost My Breath
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by Alovinmann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:31:01 PM AEST
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| nice great to have someone isn't it |
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Re: I lost My Breath
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by Alovinmann on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 01:31:02 PM AEST
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| nice great to have someone isn't it |
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Re: I lost My Breath
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by afterdark on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:03:55 PM AEST
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I really liked this one alot..I am glad I read it..
AfterDark.. |
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Re: I lost My Breath
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by Hurretje on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 07:19:17 AM AEST
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Splendid write! Good description of despair and your way out of it...
Hugs,
Hur |
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