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The sweetest reverie...
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:31:13 PM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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One-winged angel, beautifully dark seraph,
Luminous star that is lost,
Reoccurring dream that haunts my waking hours
Bittersweet reveries of you
The trees ebbed giving way to a meadow
Serene surreal
And there you stood.
You wore the night like a cloak of obscurity,
And your hair danced on the wind like a shadow.
I know not your name, I know not where you came from,
But what I do know, is that I am happy with you
Let me sleep in your gaze once more,
Float upon your endless sea of splendor
Emotions run a mock, thoughts are spoken aloud,
All I want is you here with me
Hushed are the birds in the Winters nighttime,
I met you crying underneath the starlight,
Underneath my Muses watchful eye,
This Midnight, sorrow speaks a language all its own
And as I helped you to pick up the pieces,
We stared the enchanting night all without speaking,
Just gazing, yearning for just one kiss,
Until the sun came to claim us for its own
And as the wind grew thick on the night air,
You embraced me, and we shared a kiss
Blissful, euphoric, incredibly passionate this exhilarating kiss
Everything was silenced, time had stopped,
And my heart was rupturing with unbridled love for you, and only you
You radiate such a warmth,
And I want not but to bask in your brilliant glow,
Forever tipping the scales against Winter,
And melting the ice from my naked breast,
So you could touch my black heart
In this I adore you
And as we lie in our patch of Summer,
The jealous stars can only watch our slumber
They light the heavens, yet offer no warmth of their own
And while the snow drapes against the sky,
It doesnt see us as it drifts along by,
Untouched by the Winter in a haven all of our own
You radiate such a warmth,
You could shroud the Sun in a gaze,
While it reflects like moonlight in your hair
You melted the snow from into my eyes,
For this I adore you
With you I will stay,
Here,
Warm,
Forever
Even after the morning awakens,
After the snow ceases to fall,
After the meadow shines green,
And the birds resume their careless sonnets,
I will see naught but your light,
My only dawn in an endless day
Je tami, mon ange prcieux et tomb...
I will always adore you,
Even when Im blinded by you
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2004-09-16 15:31:13]
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by emospaztic on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:35:06 PM AEST
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Nice. I love it. You create a feeling of love and warmth.
The trees ebbed giving way to a meadow…
Serene… surreal…
And there you stood….
These are my favorite lines, they just seem to work together.
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:38:53 PM AEST
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Brilliant. a connsumate picture of romantic love. also, it has French- always a wonderful touch ;-)
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by pixie on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:42:09 PM AEST
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Ohhhh that was so lovely,
pixie xx |
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by emystar on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 03:58:09 PM AEST
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Very beautifull, passonate, creative, deep write.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by wakegurl77 on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 04:41:36 PM AEST
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beautifully written
a romance only dreamed about in the hearts of most
i love it
allways sincere
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 05:19:53 PM AEST
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beautifully well woven words, delightful to read, leaves a very peaceful happy feeling in me, un ange tombé peut être sauvé par l'amour..........
hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by NikkiiBabii on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 09:11:26 PM AEST
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| wow..beautiful=] |
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Re: The sweetest reverie...
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:40:41 AM AEST
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Stephy, I am speechless. That was utterly incredible. I was, and still am, completely spellbound by the words.
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