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Severed
Contributed by
lanna047
on
Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 10:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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it can't be undone
I've made up my mind
I'm sick of this life
I won't be left behind
don't think about me
I'm through thinking of you
I'm done feeling hurt by
all the things that you do
I am moving on
reclaiming my control
all you've put me through
has at last taken its toll
why it took so long
is somewhat a confusion
did I need this many tears
to come to this conclusion?
I'm no longer tied down
I'm finally set free
you have been severed
from every part of me
Copyright ©
lanna047
... [
2004-09-16 22:19:44]
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Re: Severed
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 12th October 2004 @ 03:16:08 AM AEST
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sounds like a good moment to go on an adventure!! good write...
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Re: Severed
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Saturday, 6th November 2004 @ 08:03:41 PM AEST
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| Wonderful job, and very well written. :) |
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Re: Severed
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 08:45:33 PM AEST
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| brilliant and amazing write. written well. |
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