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The days after my Wreck on feb 28 part 2
Contributed by
stonedraider23
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:20:20 AM in AEST
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An accident that happened on feburary 28 drove me and my family to the edge
Things I wouldn't have remembered if it wasn't for my mom
Tears filled my eyes I was full of rage
Scared and not quite alone
I was screaming that someone else is here
I seen bright lights, fireballs and three man like figures surrounding me
They seemed to be talking to me or too one another
I couldn't hear them or read their lips
They seemed so far away
At that moment I was sure I passed on
And to think I was in a coma when all this took place
It was cloudy and rainy,cold most of days I was out
I was burning up, wrapped in cold blankets fighting an infection
My family was told I'd never wake up again
And two days later I awoke
Showing everyone that I wasn't ready to give up yet
I still like too know who I seen
Maybe it was God and a few others
Holding me tight and not letting me head for the brite lights I seen
I seen fire balls too maybe satan was one of the three
I do not know
But when the 13th of april arrived I woke up
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Re: The days after my Wreck on feb 28 part 2
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by emystar on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:43:00 AM AEST
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I died once when one of my ex gave me overdoses of medicene. I was out three or four days.
I din't see a brite light or any kind of lite but i did see my Mom that had been deceased longer than are. I was walking a cross a medow and my Mom was standing there with arms wide open. I moved faster when I saw my Mom. When I got close enuff to touch her before I could reach her she dropped her arms said, "No, it's not time yet."" she disappeared.
Mom came to interceed for me and that's probably why I didn't see a light.
I'm so happy u r writing'bout this 'cause there are many nonbeleivers out there and u never know how many words u r from changing someone elses life compleatly cause U r witness ing your miracle sang it loud!
Great writing and every time I read another one my heart sweels with the luv our heavenly father.
I was raised seeing miracles happen all time so that's wher emy strong faith comes from.
It's really awesome to read bout your wereck and miraculously making liers and beleivers out of the Drs and many, many more.
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: The days after my Wreck on feb 28 part 2
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by mylastwords on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 03:39:35 AM AEST
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Im left speechless after this poem...i believe in life after death...especially now...thanks...great write.
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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Re: The days after my Wreck on feb 28 part 2
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:02:40 PM AEST
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| Nicely written... |
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Re: The days after my Wreck on feb 28 part 2
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by aufdeutsch on
Thursday, 1st March 2007 @ 03:51:39 PM AEST
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| Reading your work brought back personal memories of a similar experience that I had in July of 1996. I thought your retelling of this experience was very detailed and well written. |
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