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Glass Petals
Contributed by
nikkiibabii
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:08:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sitting in an empty meadow, daisies of destiny
The wind whispers your name, I long to be free
Sun rays and pink clouds, an illusion I once sought
He loves me... or does he?...he loves me not
Sweet smelling skin, sweet breaths of air
I like to pretend that you once did care
Doubts and assumptions i've desperately fought
He loves me... or does he?... he loves me not
Entice me, melt me, enslave me and seduce
Every other intention besides pure simple truth
Ripped out my heart, let me erode and rot
He loves me... or does he?... he loves me not
Hopelessly plucking my life to mere dreams
Knowing nothin never is exactly what it seems
You know for one last sweet kiss I could settle
If only I wasn't wishing on glass petals
He loves me... or does he?... he loves me not.
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Re: Glass Petals
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by Alovinmann on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:11:17 PM AEST
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VERY MOVING!!!WELL DONE! i must say I have bias as I write lost love stuff a lot GOOD GOING!
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Re: Glass Petals
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:29:48 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, i really like your daiseys of destiny, pretty, great ending too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Glass Petals
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:42:54 PM AEST
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bitterly sad moving beautiful all wrapped into this magical piece of flowing words
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Re: Glass Petals
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by crazypoetchick461990 on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 05:51:03 PM AEST
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| wow just just wow lol |
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