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It's True
Contributed by
xXluckie_lynnXx
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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It's True
I heard somebody say
You were into me
I heard them say
That you liked me
I thought about this
And I knew its true
Because sometimes in the day
I think only of you
Night falls and I pray
For you to make a move
I want to hold you so bad
And love you is what Ill do
And when morning comes
I have fantasies
Kissing your lips
Knowing you love me
You are the person
I wish I could be
You are so cute
And sweet to me
If you ask me now
Ill say yes real fast
Because I know in my heart
Forever well last
I like you so
Yes its all for you
And if you ever question this
Baby its true
Copyright ©
xXluckie_lynnXx
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2004-09-17 17:17:06]
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Re: It's True
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by emospaztic on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:23:39 PM AEST
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Umm... this is cute? It's a good idea but everything's cliched and it all sounds kind of jerky and forced. Work on it a little more.
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Re: It's True
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 01:23:12 AM AEST
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Cuz i really liked this one. Is this for your b/f? Or was it for someone else? I am just wondering....lol. Keep it up. I am proud of you for taking up writing. It is a good way to sexpress yourself. Keep up the good stuff! Love ya big cuz,
Emily |
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Re: It's True
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by XOashleyreneXO on
Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 05:44:21 PM AEST
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love it. you really do like him. i knew it. always a great thing to let your feelings out in poems...you taught me that. its a great write!
Love you lotz! ashley rene' |
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