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The Sky
Contributed by
Elayner27
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The stars in the sky
And the Moon up high
Shine down on this world
That's now twisted and swirled
They are watching us
From there own darkness
We're watching them
Until very late in the pm
It's so cold I can see my breath
Under this night vale of death
So I hold on to you tighter
Until the sky grows lighter
And we will be together
Until our very lives smolder
Copyright ©
Elayner27
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2004-09-17 17:38:47]
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Re: The Sky
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by shelby on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 05:45:26 PM AEST
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lovely write
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Re: The Sky
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by MomentInTime on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 06:53:44 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem as I did "My Hidden Feelings".
It's good to see someone who has something to say and does so with a few words.
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Re: The Sky
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:03:27 PM AEST
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This is lovely hehe.
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