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Everything's not OK
Contributed by
poetic_ire
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:17:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You think everything's OK
Everything is right and grand
Little do you know that when
you turn around they just wait
for the right time to attack you
and pull you down.
I'm not going to let them
pull me down because of
one little mistake I made, but
the pain in your heart so sharp
you think you can never face them again
You think you've blown it out of
proportion, but your heart keeps
saying they don't want you around
Do you stay and fight
or do you admit defeat?
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Re: Everything's not OK
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:41:26 PM AEST
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| interesting, but awesome. stand and fight, stay strong! |
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Re: Everything's not OK
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by waos on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 10:58:27 PM AEST
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ya interesting... keep writing
~Jekyll/waos |
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Re: Everything's not OK
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:01:25 PM AEST
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| Emotional write, and if I was you Id stay and fight dont make my mistake and give up. |
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