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Falling Inlove
Contributed by
SLiM_eLviS
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Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:39:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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At first your beauty was my mind
The curves of your body were sublime
The shine in your eyes was enticing
Your physical features left me mesmerizing
We've talked for hours now
You're more than physicallity I avow
Your mind attracts me to open doors
I don't feel as equal as before
My feelings seemed to change
In the end your beauty is my heart
Your feelings are the crystal that I so carefully carry
Now my pride and complexities have all been buried
Your heart is tattoed on my chest
I've strived for you to be the best
I love you now with all my heart
Your love for someone else rips me apart
I want to wait for you forever
To have your love is my endeavour
Please be the one to say "We were meant to be together."
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SLiM_eLviS
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2004-09-17 23:39:53]
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Re: Falling Inlove
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by Bruce on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:44:24 PM AEST
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| lovely write and i hope it will work out for u |
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Re: Falling Inlove
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 11:49:02 PM AEST
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Lovely write... best of luck!
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net...
Jenni |
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