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goodbye
Contributed by
innerbeautyqueen
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 12:39:08 AM in AEST
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nothing i've felt can compare
more than numb, i think
more that locking love away
wiping it clean
throwing it away form me
you used to be something
someone to me
and i'm sorry sorry i've hurt you
and made you angry
but the truth is i just don't care
and i've loved you
more than i've loved anyone
but it wasn't real
and we didn't feel
maybe what we should have
it isn't as if my hearts turned to ice
i'm not so cold as that
you just mean nothing to me
and i've cried so much
because it's something i've finally realized
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Re: goodbye
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by all4jesus_teen on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:02:07 AM AEST
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This is a good poem. Great work!:) You are talented.
Steph |
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Re: goodbye
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:13:21 AM AEST
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oh such saddly dark feelings!
great job all the same though! |
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Re: goodbye
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by Aika on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:49:38 AM AEST
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| oh so sad! But true, if love goes somewhere else but not to you, then your right love will come and you have to wait for......... Great write, yet sad. WIth love, aika:-) |
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Re: goodbye
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:43:15 AM AEST
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Wow, nice way to tell someone you don't care. lol.
It will hurt...but the pain will pass.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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