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Deliciously Delicate
Contributed by
EternitysLyre
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 05:32:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
dedicatedpoems
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In circles round the fire we dance
Waltzingwishingwaivingcant
Circles circled, a covert glance
Coruscant knights who share a lance
Twas the season sought by all who wore the winters wheels
Because the reasons caught the fall before the hinters heels
Although the gasping ganders gall shant make the feathers feel
A doves beloved larks can call as nightingales can spiel
So rough and tough serrations tore from verdant life to life
Gruff and puffed sensations bore a channel to the rife
And though the trees would bleed away a forests aged knife
Rustles in the bustles spell incision-stricken strife
Relieved, deceived, and duly grieved the silence prances past
Bitten, smitten, intermittent cadence cant come last
Sober, over, three-leaf clovers burn through four-leaf grass
Filed, tiled, reconciled
A (sinking) herald hangs half-mast
So high and low become bestowed in wild, whirling winds
At best, behest the rabid rest to leave the languish limns
Seldoms sake maroons mistakes when readiness rescinds
And lyres are as liarsleft with helpless, hapless hymns
And through the stains of ribald rains
And weathring sands of time
A compass passes passive plains
(Up and down at once the same)
And nothing seems to rhyme.
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Re: Deliciously Delicate
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:31:36 AM AEST
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O_O I am so surprised that no one has commented.
This is an amazing piece of work.
i love the language you use, and the flow is perfect.
Sorry i could not offer constructive criticism, i cannot find anything wrong with this.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Deliciously Delicate
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 05:05:24 AM AEST
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A good read with strong images.
Greetz,
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