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Troops
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 08:16:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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In darkness they stand
The troops on parade
Faces solemn in the moonlight
In darkness they wait
Ready for inspection
Morning brings in another
The gravestones look on with stony silence
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adsalamon
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2004-09-18 08:16:25]
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Re: Troops
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by subgenius on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 06:58:52 PM AEST
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| I hate war, but I have nothing but admiration for soldiers. I like the "stony silence" line, I thought that was clever. This was a cool poem |
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Re: Troops
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by macmcgovern on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 10:04:43 AM AEST
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A neverending, continually growing Battalion. They will never fail, they will always be remembered. Thanks for writing a thought provoking tribute to those who suffered the ultimate sacrifice. Well done.
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