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Fruit
Contributed by
luinil
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:18:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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my fruit lies rotting in the dirt
hollow stomach wont stop churning
the pain I feel surpasses hurt
my vision blurs and my eyes are burning
I only wished to taste the choice
to see beyond the shroud of night
to scream aloud and hear my voice
to see the moon with unveiled sight
the peace I knew before has passed
the ache of knowing shatters my will
memory of your touch faded too fast
but amid the black one star is shines still
naked in the garden, I search for the sun
yielding not to the surrenders calm
for all these things that Ive become
you held in your hands broken palm
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-09-18 11:18:10]
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Re: Fruit
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by pixie on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 11:56:01 AM AEST
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very very good, well expressed and flow was spot on :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Fruit
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:16:42 AM AEST
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A great write,
(Though I'm not sure I understand it.) lol
The flow is immaculate, and the words, yummy.
Great write,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Fruit
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by Freda_Burrel on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:16:02 PM AEST
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| vantastic!!! i love it !!!!a very good write ..... keep it up.looking forward to reading more.. |
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