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Ageless
Contributed by
aspenglow
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:32:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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The years pass by, one by one,
reasons to ponder in the night,
remembering all the sweet delight.
Days come and days go, smiling
faces, frowing faces, voices on the wind.
Tender loving memories, those that
stir the pot. Some that cloud the
stew, a poison on the spot.
Seasons come and seasons go,
the work is never done, touching
hearts, making memories that
make the spirit soar.
Ageless, timeless ever Spring
is the time of every soul, sharing
and caring, in awe and wonder,
mezmerizing hearts.
We are the wind, dancing above
the meadows grass, sparkling eyes
and smiles, like finely crystallized
glass.
Copyright ©
aspenglow
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2004-09-18 13:32:35]
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Re: Ageless
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by brew on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 01:34:56 PM AEST
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| Sparkling, as precious jewels......but one who doesnt need the materlistic views. Just to know the heart is sparkling. Beautiful, and very true. |
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Re: Ageless
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:01:14 PM AEST
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This is a priceless write, Chris.....
Hope you're having a great day...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: Ageless
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:30:07 PM AEST
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This is a poignant enlightening piece. However, I have found in life that hopes and dreams are just that and end up being shattered, just like life. It seems there is never serentiy or peace for anyone anymore. Keep writing. You do it beautifully.
Rita |
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Re: Ageless
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 10:51:36 PM AEST
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truely beautiful...... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Ageless
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by Bruce on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:26:45 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: Ageless
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by critterhideaway on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 06:56:45 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful. Thank you for this. |
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Re: Ageless
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 01:19:13 AM AEST
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Thought provoking, beautifull, creative write.
a masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Ageless
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:53:36 PM AEST
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How very delightful Chris, and so touching just right!!! For the seasons of our lives change...year in and year out, but isn't it wonderful not to sit around and pout?
See the beauty with old eyes, remember the old but don't forget the new!
This was lovely, I almost shed a tear.
love
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Re: Ageless
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 08:48:25 AM AEST
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Oh My Aspenglow.........you out did yourself on this one.............I'm so happy to see you're back, and myself as well.............I always loved your marvelous poetry, and I still think you have a beautiful "feeling" heart!
Can you guess in all your ageless years whowould might be commenting here?
Surprize...........it's your friend
Lovingcritters
consue
yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeI'm back again! |
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