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My Mermaid
Contributed by
nikkiibabii
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:11:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Yes, I remember you, I still feel you,
the cool sea breath that frosts the dunes
You whisper to me with each tiny laplet
that brushes against the surface of my heart
You taunt and rip at my now weakened skull
You've torn apart my world
and you keep tugging at my soul,
hoping i'll weep for you...
... Yes, i'll succumb to ur coaxes
I will drown under your malicious waves,
and become addicted to you once again
For so many times I have wondered...
Where have you gone, my mermaid?
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nikkiibabii
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2004-09-18 14:11:24]
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Re: My Mermaid
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by Rain on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:21:36 PM AEST
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i like this because you've taken the myth of the mermaid in a way most do not seeing them as creatures not as plesant as most would rather them be. beautiful.
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Re: My Mermaid
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by Red_October on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 09:26:36 PM AEST
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| Lovely creative fantasy poem. Tiffany J. (Red_October) |
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