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Please
Contributed by
wakegurl77
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:49:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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half a step up
fall two down
one more time and
i'll hit the ground
he holds my hand
she slaps my face
put it in the past
and get off my case
his arms around me
they just feel right
i want him to kiss me
just not tonight
his hand in mine
makes me dissapear
into a world
thats oh so clear
dont get in the way
i beg of you,
please,
just let this be!
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2004-09-18 14:49:54]
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Re: Please
(User Rating: 1 )
by punkprincess6689 on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:57:57 PM AEST
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| good write. i no exactly how u feel the same thing happened to me. |
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Re: Please
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by sidneyconrad23 on
Monday, 8th November 2010 @ 02:28:20 PM AEST
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| Nice job just keep using that gift you have great write. |
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