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The Angel Is Dead
Contributed by
XxNights_ChildxX
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Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 02:52:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Angel my dearest why do you cry?,
What evil had made your soul die?,
The tears that fall onto the ground,
Silently falling without a sound,
Angel my dearest why do you shake,
What beneath you has made the ground quake,
Quivering so violently like nothing mattered,
Made of glass, broken and shattered,
Angel my dearest why are your eyes so dim?
What darkness has found its way within?
Looking past everything with a careless stare,
Not knowing who you hurt, not bothering to care,
Angel my dearest why do you want death?,
What demon has stolen your pure breath?,
No longer having the will to go on at all,
Watching as life will plummet and fall,
Angel my dearest why did you let go?,
What has made you want it to be so?,
Something is wrong and stuck in your head,
But it doesn't matter cause the angel is dead.
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Re: The Angel Is Dead
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by waos on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 03:04:18 PM AEST
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I really liked that... I'm into angels and stuff like that. I wrote something called "Black Angel Wings" and it would be totally awesome if you would read it.
I really liked how it all flowed and kept the same form kind of :)
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Re: The Angel Is Dead
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by subgenius on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 05:22:01 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of a kid back home that recently killed himself. It's really sad to see someone completely lose themselves in depression |
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Re: The Angel Is Dead
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by candysears on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:09:20 PM AEST
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Love angel poems...Great indeed!
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