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Almost gone
Contributed by
all4jesus_teen
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 06:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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We have drifted so far apart,
A barrier between us,
This was not meant to be.
They have almost won,
I wish to continue fighting,
but,
I cannot if we are apart.
I wish it to be the way it was,
before they destroyed us,
Will it ever be that way again?
She laughs,
while I fight tears,
for,
I no longer know.
Why did they come between us,
everything has been destroyed,
no longer are we what we used to be,
we are broken,
almost destroyed.
We must keep fighting,
but she has given up,
all her hope has gone,
and with it,
all of mine,
for once,
I was her hope,
but now we are nothing.
We were only broken,
but then we changed,
Can we ever fit back again?
We have lost each other,
I know none of her pain,
She has lost hope,
and,
I can no longer tell her feelings.
She has given up,
but I will not let go,
I will never give up hope,
but,
I have waited too long,
whether of my own accord,
or,
reasons unchangeable.
Yet,
we have drifted,
so much,
that,
I no longer know,
what she desires.
I think,
but I can never be sure.
She laughs,
I cry,
for we have drifted too far for understanding,
I will never give up,
I will never let go,
yet,
we are drifting apart,
and she is,
almost gone.
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Re: Almost gone
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 03:18:08 PM AEST
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When all is gone but the feeling that you can do nothing more.
I wish with all my heart that you get her back. Friendships should not be thrown away lightly.
Take care.
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Re: Almost gone
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by MissMandy on
Thursday, 12th July 2007 @ 10:10:54 AM AEST
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sad, sad.
i hate it when i'm fighting for a friendship that the other person isn't fighting for.
my least favorite.
i love this poem. it captures true feeling.
keep at it.
-mandy-
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