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a better place
Contributed by
steve-o
on
Saturday, 18th September 2004 @ 09:25:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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what's the point of this life
i could take it with a knife
no one would even heed
as death carries me as i bleed
clenched fists with slit wrists
from what you can see
no one cares about me
i hate this world, it's ran on obsessions
and unholy confessions
as i take my life today
you'll all carry the burdon of the blame
lying in my bed
i hope to see just what you did to me
blood,dripping obscenely
i got fed up with this ****
you should have seen the hints
now it's too late
i'm in a better place
e-mail me at desertskater16@msn.com and tell me what u think about my "poem"
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steve-o
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2004-09-18 21:25:07]
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Re: a better place
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by Lynnie on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 05:17:21 PM AEST
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| I hope you don't mean these words. If so, you need to talk to someone, because you would not be going to a better place. And there is always someone who cares, you just need to look around you. |
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