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Silence
Contributed by
emocutie07
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 01:35:06 AM in AEST
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The Silence is deafening
Emotions are stirred
I sit and wait
A flood of voices come rushing in
Crashing loud upon my ears
While my own hides cowardly beneathe the Earth
The wind stumbles in angry as ever
I want to shout, but no sound escapes my lips
The air smolders into cascading water, flowing freely through my veins
The icicles around my eyes begin to melt...
For a moment the wind seemed to blink, as I gazed at the shadow that stood before me
The fire in his eyes began to trickle down his cheek...
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Re: Silence
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 02:20:38 AM AEST
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| awesome |
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Re: Silence
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:06:05 AM AEST
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Yeah, i like this too,
Though, i have no idea what to say about it.
Great write.
I love the last line.
Phil xxx |
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Re: Silence
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 12:55:42 PM AEST
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that was awesome, crystal...and definitly very metaphorical, Very good poem
Love, Mason |
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Re: Silence
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:23:59 PM AEST
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WOW!!!
U got it going on here... good write... don't give up! I would like to read more from u...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Silence
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 09:18:56 PM AEST
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I want to shout, but no sound escapes my lips
The air smolders into cascading water, flowing freely through my veins... beautiful. this captures how I so often feel. this is a strong write. great read keep it up! A++++ |
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Re: Silence
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:06:22 AM AEST
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Another Good poem
I will read more |
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Re: Silence
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 2nd November 2004 @ 08:07:18 AM AEST
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Very very nice
well done |
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