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Death Is Calling
Contributed by
screwup
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 02:58:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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tired of this life
tired of trying
tired of feeling like dying
clutching the blade
making my pain fade
wishing that I were dead
thoughts build up in my head
tired of the cocaine
tired of the pot
wishing everyone would stop
cutting in lines
going crazy, I am not fine
watching the blood run
wishing this life was done
tired of the constant betrayl
tired of falling
tired of death calling
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Re: Death Is Calling
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:44:39 PM AEST
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Hey , nice write. "Habit Things" is a constant betrayal in anyones life. I can relate- both feeling those words and seeing the vision of my own blood running. Fortunately I felt a Buds hand calling me back.. So now I write about those dark days.
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Re: Death Is Calling
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:56:44 PM AEST
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Deanna...
I don't really know what to say... it's a nice write... I know these things u feel or have delt with... don't let it b/c so much so that I lose u friend... Don't think I could bear that! Love ya.
~Donna~ |
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Re: Death Is Calling
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:35:54 AM AEST
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apart from the drugs, i can relate strongly with your feelings! but please don't give up Deanna!
i care s much about you!
please don't go! |
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