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Evil Lust
Contributed by
screwup
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 03:17:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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he gave me that look of horror
as I looked in his eyes
the look of pure evil
looked back up... as I died
I could feel the fire burn
as he touched me... build up inside
he had and ice to his hands
and a fire to his voice
pressed up against me
showed me his true face
another one to betray me
when he touched me
I wanted to curl up and die
and I screamed as I started to cry
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2004-09-19 15:17:25]
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Re: Evil Lust
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:41:02 PM AEST
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| Great poem & creepy as creepy men can be. |
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Re: Evil Lust
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by kidpoet_213 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:47:55 PM AEST
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Hey...
Another good one... I can feel the horror and pain with this write... this nut has put u thru enuff! Enuff is enuff... Deanna... don't let this guy get the best of u!! okay?
Take care...
Love u...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Evil Lust
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by Flipped_out on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 04:55:31 PM AEST
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"it seems like the only way to get away from him is to die... "
Try the police they have Taser guns now
Or Horlicks for a better nights sleep |
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Re: Evil Lust
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:39:27 AM AEST
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i'm with kid_poet!
don't let him do this to you! |
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