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Kissed A Dream
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
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I kissed a dream goodbye
with tears and silence.
Let it rise on lonely wings.
Felt the whisper of a wind
as it lelt my open hand.
Watched it's beauty fade
in the dark sky.
Knew the pain of wisdom.
Felt the emptiness of loss.
I kissed a dream goodbye
with tears and silence.
Watched it disappear...
to never come again.
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-09 00:00:00]
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 12:21:09 AM AEST
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I can relate to this all to well
twice over. My heart goes out
to you. Sad write
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by Poetic_Angel on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:25:30 AM AEST
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| sad but good poem. i like it a lot |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 01:27:50 AM AEST
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| AAAwww How very sad,that had to be hard! God Bless Christina |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:15:16 AM AEST
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| This is so touching! wow...hope ur ok now babe x |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by Haligh on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:33:12 PM AEST
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| beautifully written. |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:57:01 PM AEST
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| I just wanted to let you know that I am ok now. ShadowsCloud |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:25:32 AM AEST
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This is so very sad Candice,
I'm pleased to see you write that you're Ok now!
I cannot even begin to imagine what this must feel like, so all I can say is that I'm sorry to hear this happened, but you come across as being somewhat stronger for it, even being strong enough to write this and post it!
Well done young lady.
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by ShadowsCloud on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 05:06:35 AM AEST
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Thank you Dean. And I am stronger because it happened. But I still think about alot. Because I really wanted that baby. A baby is one of the things that I want most out of life. I think about that so much, that already know how many childern I want AND what I'm going to name them. But even when I have other childern the one that I lost will always be in my heart. I think about how old the baby would be, what it would look like. All that stuff. I would try to explain how this feels to you but it is really hard to describe. For me I felt like I was empty inside. And it always hurt, it is better now, but some times it still hurts. My baby would about a year old now, and if not walking already, the baby would start to walk soon. Okay I am going to stop talking about this because it is causing me to think about it. Thanks for the comment.
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Re: Kissed A Dream
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by riverofwords on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 06:57:50 AM AEST
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well done awesome words
kiss a dream goodbye ..but more dreams
will fly to you better than the last one
take heart
peace be your journey
terry
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