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-Cry-
Contributed by
starryskyez09
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Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:38:49 PM in AEST
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Why do I have to cry?
Why do you make me cry?
It seems you don't care about me,
But you used to.
You told me you loved me,
And I loved you too,
And I still do,
But why do you make me cry?
I'm put through so much pain,
That sometimes I wanna leave,
But i'll never give up on you,
Because I love you too much.
My friends say im crazy,
That I need to move on,
But I can't leave you,
Even though you make me cry.
Why do you make me cry?
That's all I need to know,
Why do you hurt me and hurt me,
Like your doing so.
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Re: -Cry-
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 07:41:04 PM AEST
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this hit really hard.
i know what this feels like.
it feels like right now.
good job on your poem. |
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Re: -Cry-
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by emystar on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:07:42 PM AEST
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Hi there,
Psycologically a person that abuses like that do that cause they feel insecure so they make others hurt to hide their insecurity.
My ex and I were together bout six years. Well he never changed he only got worse so I couldn't take anymore so we've been apart all most as long as we were together. I'm alone but very happy with myself.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: -Cry-
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by markie on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:26:48 PM AEST
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| I'll never give up on you...I wrote that very same line...but he gave up on me...broke my heart and I felt what you feel now. Still do, some. It's gone away, a little...gets better with time and more writing. Keep up the great work... |
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Re: -Cry-
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:47:15 PM AEST
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| emotional abuse, i guess that follows the same cycle as violence. which isnt a good thing. i will tell you one thing, dont let passion rule reason. it will only lead you downhill. |
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Re: -Cry-
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 28th September 2004 @ 12:16:56 AM AEST
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| I understand how you feel, I've been there before, your a really great writer, Good Work ! and Great Write !!! |
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