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Song Mask
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 08:20:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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A song flows so convincingly
Out of the lips of fraud
Tuning every melody to create
The perfect song.
Deceiving fingers stroke the cords
Of the precious harp,
Blood drips from the fingers,
Red and oh so dark.
Acid pressed against the wound,
Screams echo so tragic
Through the air.
The mask so slowly
Falls to the floor.
The real face, now, bare.
Exposed to everything,
For everyone to see,
All the lies and things it said
Thrown back in spears that
Bleed.
Tears stream down,
so
Helplessly.
Too weak to have strength as a tool.
don’t you see,
That teary face
So broken
Reflects You?
Copyright ©
xxbreathlessx
... [
2004-09-19 20:20:32]
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Re: Song Mask
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 19th September 2004 @ 09:30:49 PM AEST
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| amazing write. dark and powerful. nice style. =] |
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Re: Song Mask
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by shelby on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:55:59 PM AEST
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I cant believe I almost missed this soooooo incredible and haunting
Michelle |
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Re: Song Mask
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 6th October 2004 @ 08:35:45 PM AEST
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one word ... WOW !!!
(crap) three more ... That was awesome !!!
*****
Nazmythian
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