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My Joan - A Quatrain
Contributed by
Ramfire
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 06:30:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw on the hill a little place,
where flowers gave bloom to colors bright.
And to that place I sought to go,
to drink in their fragrance of sweet delight.
It was there they grew in one accord,
marking the hillside for all to see.
But soon I saw with greater view,
my Joan cutting blossoms solely for me.
She stopped to kneel slicing just a slip,
not knowing one watched her dearly.
A group she made of many hues,
my Joan working alone so quietly.
Some blossom here, many blossoms there,
each in its place she gently laid them.
A flowing heap of shades she made,
my Joan harvesting cast of the spectrum.
She quit her work when I called to her,
a sudden smile broke forth with laughter.
A moment's kiss is what we had,,
with hands entwined we walked home thereafter.
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Ramfire
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2002-07-18 06:30:23]
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Re: My Joan - A Quatrain
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 07:15:32 AM AEST
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This is beautifull, smooth as silk. So much made from a moment in time.............excellent
Rgds
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Re: My Joan - A Quatrain
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 08:24:51 AM AEST
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Thankyou for sharing this very beautiful memory
Chrissie x |
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Re: My Joan - A Quatrain
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by wray on
Thursday, 10th June 2004 @ 04:39:18 AM AEST
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| Your "Joan" poems seem to catch my eye since my name's Joan too. I have to say I really enjoy reading your work, you use understatement in such a beautiful, poetic, peaceful way. |
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