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Contributed by
necronomy
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Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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The sun is blaring,
and the birds are shining,
and the air is rigid with anticipation.
the sharp corners.
I smile past the peaks and steeples,
while the clouds hug my peripheries,
waggling the sky beckons me forth,
the side walk marks my progress,
with intermittent displacement.
Stilts made of legs,
i am carried.
the horizon yawns,
and i fall into it.
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2002-11-09 02:00:00]
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Re: Go
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:10:11 AM AEST
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| Sweet...like it babe. Thanx for sharing x |
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:05:21 AM AEST
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This is cute, i enjoyed
reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:16:44 PM AEST
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This is cool... I love the flow...
YS |
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:26:31 AM AEST
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keep writing in
the future your
poems are neat . |
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 06:33:12 AM AEST
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Dear Necronomy @-<-<<
...of course I love this... as I have come to expect in this brief night whilst reading you, at first could not put my finger on it though 'tis your metaphors that are so enchanting here...
always Nessa |
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:39:15 AM AEST
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nessa is right. your metaphor is enchanting. I love the way you describe things. draws excellent pictrues. keep writing.
kara |
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