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LUCY
Contributed by
Mr_Shadows
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:25:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Wheres that place inside my mind,
the place thats dark and hard to find.
My best friend was stolen from me today,
through my fingers she slipped away.
I need to find peace inside my mind,
Inside that place thats hard to find.
Through her last breath she spoke to me,
I'll always be here so dont cry for me....
We never forget those who have fallen,
we'll always remember those we love.
(dont cry they never leave us)
Just know its best this way.
I need the sanctuary of a peaceful solice,
inside my box where noone will notice.
My best friend was taken from me today,
through my fingers she slipped away.
Through her last breath she spoke to me,
I'll always be here so dont cry for me !
We never forget those who have fallen,
we'll always remember those we love.
(dont cry they never leave us)
Just know its best this way.
THIS IS MY DEDICATION
TO MY FALLEN FRIEND
MY OATH TO NEVER FORGET
MY ETERNAL FRIEND ....
LOVE ... WILL ... LAST ... FOREVER
Copyright ©
Mr_Shadows
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2004-09-20 02:25:15]
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Re: LUCY
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by Hurretje on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:51:25 AM AEST
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Touching... A good tribute. I'm sorry to hear from your terrible loss.
Strength to you!
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Re: LUCY
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by blackholesun on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:47:44 AM AEST
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| its a good write,verry sad that you had to loose a friend,but im sure that lucy is proud of you for bieng strong enough to let even strangers know how you feel,i can tell you will make it,i think you couldrelate to my poetry i have a poem called cemetery trees that i dedicated to a couple of my friends who commited suicide,plz send me a message !maybe we can buddy list eachother!mellow ! |
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