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MISTAKE PRONE
Contributed by
Lionel
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 12:35:24 PM in AEST
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This morning, I woke just before dawn,
looked beside me for my darling Joan.
Found, poor me, I was all alone;
the only love of my life was gone.
Like an escaped canary she had flown,
and I'm left here to cry and moan.
I would give everything that I own,
even apply for a high interest loan,
repent of the bad seed I have sown,
if it would enable me to chance upon,
that little wretch of a fickle fawn:
because I'd like to see her groan,
be taken apart bone by bone,
and planted under my backyard lawn,
for the heartless deceit she has shown.
Then, I'd escape to worlds unknown,
and repeat the same mistake, erelong,
with some misguided shrew of a pawn,
who, unto me an evil breeze has blown,
from the heart of the twilight zone -
a windblown clone of my darling Joan.
Written by: Tyrone Slone (pseudonym)
Copyright ©
Lionel
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2004-09-20 12:35:24]
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by shelby on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 02:33:40 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this made me smile
Michelle |
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by critterhideaway on
Thursday, 23rd September 2004 @ 07:31:14 AM AEST
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| Oh yes!! I needed a smile this morning and this you gave me! Thank you for this one. |
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by Overstated on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 04:42:29 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this poem I think the start was superb liking 'Joan' to a bird was ace - great poem! |
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by Flipped_out on
Monday, 27th September 2004 @ 02:30:59 PM AEST
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Very nicely done Lionel...or tyrone...
Quite a tricky little poem all lines having a familar tone..but very nicely put
TY
Kelly x
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by emystar on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:50:03 PM AEST
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Wow, that's a lot of moans-n-groans.
very creative.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: MISTAKE PRONE
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 20th October 2004 @ 10:15:18 AM AEST
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Woah! So different for you. I hope this isn't for real!
Stitch |
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