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I died…
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 12:36:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I died.
Never committed suicide,
But I died!
And was just left aside.
What do you want?
Of coarse Im NOT alright!
Ive lost my mind!
Sure Im happy some times,
But inside,
It doesnt make it ALRIGHT!
Coz Ive got a twisted life!
And a broken mind!
I cant help but cry!
Why you want me to be alright?
Theres NO MORE suicide,
Theres NO POINT.
But I cant heal!
Coz Im DEAD inside!!!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-20 12:36:00]
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Re: I died…
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by Katie2008 on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 01:02:18 PM AEST
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Wow, I can really relate to this a lot. You're a very talented writer. I just read your comment on my poem "Do You Know What It's Like?" And I'm sorry your friend did that to you and the kids at your school treated you like. I don't understand people at all, they're so cruel sometimes. I hope you're doing well. Take care and good luck, you've got your writing to keep you strong.
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Re: I died…
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 07:23:37 PM AEST
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i can totally relate to what youre saying.
its an awesome poem.
keep writing!
cant wait to read more.
jenny |
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