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Inner Wrist
Contributed by
calista
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:34:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Inner Wrist
September 20, 2004
Of all the places you could touch me,
Theres only place I cant resist.
When you press your lips into a kiss,
On my inner wrist.
Sure I love your deep stares,
And fingers through my hair,
Who could say no to your touches,
Herethereeverywhere?
But still its the stroke of your thumb,
Brushing over my wrist,
That makes my heart hum,
And my body do this
Theres a heat I cant explain,
That coincides with pain and pleasure
The waiting that gets me,
Until you touch me there.
Of all the places you could touch me,
Theres only place I cant resist.
When you press your lips into a kiss,
On my inner wrist.
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Re: Inner Wrist
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:37:05 PM AEST
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strong and sensual. great peom
There’s a heat I can’t explain,
That coincides with pain and pleasure
The waiting that gets me,
Until you touch me there.
I really liked these lines. I know the feeling...
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Re: Inner Wrist
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:22:57 PM AEST
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*Smiles*
Jenni |
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Re: Inner Wrist
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by ALineAboveTheStepBeneath on
Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 07:29:36 PM AEST
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| Excellent write... It's amazing how something so simple can be so sensual, isn't it? |
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Re: Inner Wrist
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by xXcrossedXx on
Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 03:06:41 AM AEST
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This was a very very dramatic and sexual this was fabulous! Great poem. Beaiful, I loved this. Wonderful Write!
Keep it Up!
Please write more!
--amanda-- |
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