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Admiration of the Mind
Contributed by
shanarah
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 08:59:48 PM in AEST
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Delicate strengths of your focus
wherever you be fearless
certainty among your thoughts
Transforming beauty to be born
Enjoy the passage of the untouchable
prolong the enchanted state
depart without fear
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Re: Admiration of the Mind
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Sunday, 26th September 2004 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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The most intriguing aspect of this poem is that it takes a concept as never-ending and complex as the mind, and manages to very well summarize it's intricacies in a mere seven lines.
"Enjoy the passage of the untouchable
prolong the enchanted state
depart without fear"
This may sound odd, but those last three lines would make an awesome signature! As it stands, this is a very captivating write.
Hurled onto the railroad tracks,
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