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°°°Heaven's Gate°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Many a year i spent searching for you
As i had lost faith, you arose out of the blue
Yet this is a love story with a different twist
It was beyond destiny, which brought us to this
~*~
I wish i could say it was love at first sight
But all we had was our illusion in the night
At last here it comes the moment of truth
Dreams can come true, we are living proof
~*~
It was under the arch of heaven, at the appointed place
We were finally together and stood face to face
Not a word was spoken, i became lost in your eyes
As your lips approached mine, we rose to the skies
~*~
Words can never tell what happened that night
Hormones raced, emotions spilled, souls took flight
But all that was sacred remained in that state
Our love just blossomed, it was our fate
~*~
I wanted to die in your arms the night you died
But you told me to go on, living my life
You said to be happy, not to shed a tear
I did what you asked for many years
~*~
One night i couldnt take living without you no more
My heart was lonely, battered, and torn
I needed to be with you by your side
My heart wants your love, i'm doing what's right
~*~
My eyes saw your face back in memories of time
I knew for years, you were eternally mine
You knew we were meant to be the night we met
You greeted me in heaven, as my soul met death
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-11-09 08:30:00]
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:20:40 AM AEST
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| your words are so close to the very truth, wonderful write Oreo |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by horseluver on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:40:28 AM AEST
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| Wow-excellent job Oreo!-Awesome write-full of emotion-..though a bit creepy to think about ...- and it flows nicely!! A+!!!! Like you always say..."keep 'em comin" : )~ Jess |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 03:53:50 AM AEST
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| What a touching write ! The rythm you always have with your words is a thing of beauty! Another winner....:o) Laryy |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:43:31 AM AEST
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| Love this poem ... beautiful idea. |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Necronomy on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 07:58:29 AM AEST
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| nice but sad, too bad for things like that happening :( |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by orgygirl on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 08:32:45 AM AEST
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This is so sad but its a beautiful poem! This left me quite speechless. Thank you for sharing..
Take care
R. |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 11th November 2002 @ 12:39:21 PM AEST
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This is really lovely, OreO. You have a way with words..you seem to make them come alive....
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Yellowrose on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 11:33:22 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful emotional poem you have created. A great job! All the best, Yellowrose. |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Ramfire on
Friday, 15th November 2002 @ 07:35:18 AM AEST
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Love lost is hard to bear. You have a nice way of telling about tragic things.
Ramfire |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by spaceotter on
Monday, 18th November 2002 @ 05:30:26 PM AEST
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| Wow!!!! |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by krazykat on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 02:32:19 AM AEST
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| wow, really great , but a magor tear jerker "well it made me cry"nice job you really have talent {{&&}} krazykat {{&&}} |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by Sarah22 on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:07:12 AM AEST
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| beautiful poem O :*) . |
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Re: °°°Heaven's Gate°°°
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by yellow_sundragon on
Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 09:43:31 PM AEST
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wow. This is amazing. I really like this. The images. Your an amazing poet.
YS |
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