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Contributed by smelting on Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 10:25:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

walk the streets...down the hall.
see the faces of these people starin.
little kid follow you round, dont know why.
look up not down.
little girl smile, hurtig your self
this pain inside, it kills
happy around you, you all smile keep it on our face, never let it go.
flag flys, you think about why
doin your school, tryin real hard but its never enough.
your just writing on and on about non sense crap.
cars drive look at there faces, what are they thinking, whats rushing through there head?
pens flyin on paper never to stop.
see that gun, feel the pain inside, you pick itup , look at it, think real hard.people come in you hide it.
leaving...little brother walks in, gun goes *bang* body goes *bam*
tears drip...looking at that stone, readding those words, no one can believe it happened.
It's gone never to be seen nor heard again.
smiles around, laughing your happy cuz you've done it.
your bein congradulated, you cant stop smilin.
run, run, never stop still finished
dont give up on the race, dont give up on your self.
live your life to its fullest, never loose it.

Copyright © smelting ... [ 2004-09-20 22:25:23]
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