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What Was Meant To Be
Contributed by
mdmorash
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Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:14:52 PM in AEST
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I closed my eyes,
Upon my world,
And fell away to dreams.
The darkness of my days,
Was soon replaced,
By the light,
That burns within my hope.
Soon I touched,
The silky white,
And drew it far away.
And what I saw,
What I beheld,
Was a window to my soul?
And when it opened,
I heard my song,
And felt my breath exhale.
For came the moment,
Within my life,
When I finally understood.
That all I'd sought,
Was not for me.
And for to long,
Id played the fool.
So I chose to stop,
And take my place,
There, within the scene.
And stand upon,
The sandy beach,
Of what was meant to be.
2004
Michael David Morash
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mdmorash
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Re: What Was Meant To Be
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by tifrob on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:58:28 PM AEST
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Hello again,
This poem seems to be a bit more reflective into the inner you. I read it a couple of times and I truly like it. Of course, you know how much I like your work. I visited your site again a while back looking for the 3rd poem to your epic. I can't wait... I have forwarded your website so others can read work. You are a Master Story Teller... As I've said before, I wish I had your vision and ability to write the way you do. Good job!
Take Care,
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Re: What Was Meant To Be
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 12:57:21 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty-n-wisdom.
luv, hugs, smiles,
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Re: What Was Meant To Be
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by mdmorash on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:13:12 AM AEST
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Thank you.
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