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woken by a whisper
Contributed by
apoetswhisper
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:39:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Not one night I have slept, woken by a whisper
one so gentle, a breeze seem's heavier
for I have dreamed and dreamed of things anew
but my mind still flicker with thoughts of you
My nights still troubled, by this whisper that leaves my heart bare
open to attack, the love I once held dear
endless doubt, mind does not wish to share
for these doubts are my own, to much for one to bare
Days relentless, nights unslept
feelings still linger and that I must accept
beyond my eyes a broken love revealed
with moments of bliss, but wounds that have not healed
I've wondered how? and why? now flaw's I see before me
with troubled mind and troubled times, my tears I see before me
transparent are my feelings now. just like waters clear
heart truly open now. this I knew and feared
Darkness fall before my eyes, and drapes my wounded heart
memories still linger here, but soon they will depart
the whisper was "I LOVE YOU"
the one that held my heart
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apoetswhisper
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Re: woken by a whisper
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:19:17 AM AEST
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| brilliant write. truely brilliant. |
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Re: woken by a whisper
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:43:41 AM AEST
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| Like a love poem with just a hint of confusion. I think the line "open to attack, the love I once held dear' expresses the emotion that many of us feel at times. Well done! |
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Re: woken by a whisper
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 03:44:08 PM AEST
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well written, beautifully sad..... warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: woken by a whisper
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by brew on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 04:52:30 PM AEST
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| Whispers that still linger for all...........I think alot would love that to happen....Beautiful write.~! |
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Re: woken by a whisper
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 20th October 2009 @ 12:38:16 PM AEST
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I love your writing so sad but wonderful,
sp |
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