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Battered Bride
Contributed by
Kiz
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
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Id watch her walk by every day
Smile, but I didnt know what to say
I know he beat her, I could hear her anguished screams
I told my children they were just bad dreams.
They belonged to the pretty girl upstairs
Who fell deeply in love
Then stripped of every ounce of pride
When she said I do and became a battered bride.
Once upon a time turned into pure hell
She didnt have the courage to tell
I asked her once and she lied
My help was denied.
She was found yesterday, hanging in the kitchen with a new rope braid
And a note saying she would never again be afraid
He dug her grave long ago
But her death had been quite slow.
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Kiz
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2002-11-09 10:30:00]
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Re: Battered Bride
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by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 10:46:51 AM AEST
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Very sad write
It's sad that this actually
does happen in reality
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Battered Bride
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by ShadowsCloud on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 11:32:04 AM AEST
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Very sad. Unfortunately I know what it is like to go through something like that, I was battered by my first boyfriend, and I also watched my mom go through it with one of her boyfriends. The good news it that we are both ok and finally very happy.
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Re: Battered Bride
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 12:40:52 PM AEST
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| Wow,this was real depressing!I can't even imagine! So mant batered girls dont tell untill its too late! Good write! Christina |
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Re: Battered Bride
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by PhantomsLDY on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:13:50 PM AEST
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| I was a battered bride in my first marriage but I got out intact. A lot of women don't. I'm happily married now and have a good life. My husband is a wonderful and sensitive man. I always feel horrible for those who don't make it. This is a great poem and if more people knew that would help a lot. |
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Re: Battered Bride
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by Necronomy on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 08:02:25 AM AEST
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| ehrg, yes he should be charged with murder for that. should have been him hanging from that rope. >:( |
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Re: Battered Bride
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by Nazaholic on
Sunday, 10th November 2002 @ 12:22:13 PM AEST
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| i have a friend going through a similar situation it`s aggervating when they won`t listen can totaly relate good write |
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