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Slipping
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:15:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the mirror
its me
a clear surface
runied by its reflection
a puddle
runied by a single tear
seems everything i touch brakes
with every word i say
i just seem to hate
whats happend to me?
why am i falling?
why am i hurting?
the pictures broke now
fell straight out of its frame
landed flat on its face
even the earth trembles beneth my foot
what have i done?
stabilty so far away
along with my smile
i dont want to fade
like others before me
keep me in reality
but every day i slip
never just a gentle float
choking myself with the words from my own throat
seems truth is almost to close to catch
reality please bring me back
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loopylou
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2004-09-21 08:15:45]
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Re: Slipping
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by mylastwords on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:24:44 AM AEST
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nice write...keep it up...
i know what its like to be gradually slipping away...
xxooxx mylastwords xxooxx |
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