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Not Over Yet
Contributed by
drummerchic18
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:49:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
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No one knows the depths of my heart
no one sees the tears in my eyes
My fatalities scream beyond my consent
It becomes more than i can bare alone
More than what I can control
Breath comes not quite so easily
as I fall down on my knees
I gasp for air every moment of this long wretched day
No words, no feelings, no emotions
A stone image is what I've become in my solitude
The best is not yet and the worst is yet to come
Love passes by without a flash
without meeting its match
No one cares that someone is dying
or if a little one is crying.
It spins out of control
Two people pass each other by
with nothing more than a look in one another's eyes.
Love cannot break free
from all these fatalities
Yet love is a concept
that which we think we need to protect
But it's not over yet
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2004-09-21 08:49:09]
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Re: Not Over Yet
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:07:48 AM AEST
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Beautiful... but sad poem... I love the way it flows... the rhythm... nice write... keep 'em coming...
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