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Angel girl
Contributed by
Inevitable
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:40:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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This girl
she rocked the world
Yet she
was never happy
Behind all those smiles
and crazy antics
Was a girl
who cried herself to sleep
Behind all those jokes
and friendly laughs
Was a girl
who lost her faith
An angel
whose wings,
Were ripped apart
by vicious words.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
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2004-09-21 14:40:52]
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Re: Angel girl
(User Rating: 1 )
by SlimStaple on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:24:15 PM AEST
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| I think this is okay like this but would be better if it was longer. |
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Re: Angel girl
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 02:54:41 AM AEST
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| AWESOME! |
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