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DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 02:43:22 PM in AEST
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THE ANSWER IS YES!
Please comment on this...!
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I watch you laughing with her.
Mucking about with her.
Playing dumb computer games with her.
Her, Dorothy. Shes my sister!
Your sister.
Only do you abuse her?
Thats what you did to me,
When I was her age.
You made me feel dirty.
Then you locked me up in an emotional cage.
And I lied for you.
Covered it up.
Shut my gob.
I was scared of you!
You, my brother!
You sexually abused me.
What did I ever do?
To deserve you.
I hate you!
Youre new kindness,
It doesnt wash through me.
Im not full of blindness.
Ill never be!
You get your computer games,
Invite me to your room.
Stuff you Richard!
Youre mucked with, youre scrude.
So you get of friendly with Dorothy.
Where is your kick?
I dont know if youve ever abused her.
I just know you make me sick!
The worst part is youre my brother,
And I see you each day!
Youre always laughing.
Like you were, when you were abusing me.
I dont thinks its right,
For you to mix with girls.
Youre sick!
You mucked my life,
My twisted my mind.
You broke my world!
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deathdrop
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2004-09-21 14:43:22]
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:02:07 PM AEST
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Very sad!
I can relate to thse feeling 'cause one of my uncles abused me as a small child.
I jus posted a poem, LITTLE GIRL SCREAMING, U might wonna read it, also U BLEW YOUR BRAINS OUT. That ones to my uncle. Maybe u can find some solace in these writes. Jus know u r not alone.
luv, huggs, prayer, faith in self, hope, joy,
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by FleurdeSang on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:10:48 PM AEST
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Deathdrop, I am dreadfully sorry for this happening to you... I know what this is like, for I have gone through it myself... You are not alone. People like your brother don't deserve to live a free life, or live at all for that matter.... This is a very heartwrenching write, filled with anguish, and surpressed hate, finally revealed... Dearest deathdrop, my heart has been wrenched and hurled and trampled on... Potent, incredibly sad write, my friend.. i am sorry again for this happening to you, and for the other individuals that have to go through this every day... All my love to you. You have a friend in me, deathdrop... You can come to me to talk, if you wish... ::Hugs!:: Good luck with finding solace and happiness, deathdrop... There is a happines sfor us all somewhere along the way... You just have to find it. Incredible write again, you are talented... My apologies for this again, sweet friend... Your newest friend,
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 04:55:41 PM AEST
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well rosie, i think your brother only deserves a little bit, but enough about him, this is about you and your sister. if you are scared for your sister, that he might actually be doing this to her, you need to get her away from him. find her some relative and ship her off there if he actually is doing that. you need to not let fear inhibit you, you need to know, or you will only wonder about it. YOU ARE ONE OF THE ONLY ONES THAT CAN HELP YOUR SISTER NOW, if he is abusing her.
i think what youve gone through is something no one deserves to go through, but unfortunantly it happens. i can understand you not being able to move on from this, but you need to try or youll be stuck where you are now. you will never be able to forget, you will just have to accept what happened and that it will never change. you are letting what happened then affect you now(understandable) but do you want that to affect you like this? or do you want to be stronger because of it, help others because of it, becuase you understand, you can help others get help while helping yourself. we all can control some things in life and some things we cant. what your brother did you cant control, what you can do is what you can control. fare well in your life and choices rosie. hope springs eternal afterall. |
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by Rose on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 06:19:03 PM AEST
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There's so much you can do for you and your sister. Im so in awe of your write, its made me cry. For you both have broken hearts. You can do something for her, if you just take her to another relative, a teacher, police, a counselor, someone you DO TRUST, please do this. For the pain in your write is unbearable to know you are enduring this as your sister is too, get her out of there to someone you know and trust.
Its important you keep writing out your pain, as it does help my dear. Do not give up, for having faith in your own instinct, and pray,and Yes, I will add you to a prayer wheel. For in times of need, HE the Lord will see to it, your brother will get his punishment. Sometimes, it takes the courage of someone like you to put him there. I realize you may not see you are alone, but you are not. Please keep writing, and get you and your sister out of there. IF funds, food, or shelter are your worries, this can be helped with a person you can trust and help you both. Just so you are not alone or with your brother again. AS for letting other family members know, well this is difficult, but you must take the essential step and do what you must, do not hold back, do not hide, go for help, for you both. I can only pray for you both to have courage and help,a nd put your brother away.
Please I ask of you to consider this. YOU can be helped and you sister too. It will take alot of courage to do all that will be asked of you to go against him, but you must, in order for you and your sister to get the help you need to lead a decent life. Please, I know it feels as if nothing is there, or you are lost, in pain, no one there, but there is, we are far, but there has to be someone outside of family if possible or a trusted family member, that you can take your sister to, and do the hardest of all things you have to do, and get your brother in jail. His threats will not be anything, he cannot do anything any more, if you help put him away, so please, be strong, courage it will take, and we will keep praying for you,a nd please keep writing it all out. It will help you.
take care and all in Gods Blessings,
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by Stitch on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 11:11:05 AM AEST
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This is heartfelt, raw and moving.
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Re: DO YOU ABUSE HER RICHARD?
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by Nicole_Rahaman on
Monday, 4th October 2004 @ 01:17:59 PM AEST
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Oh my Gosh.... I truly feel your pain throughout this piece... I need to let you know something... While reading it, I got a gutsy feeling that you have a great work to do in this life. I think that all that you have passed through and are going through now, is a preparation for something greater. I do not know what... I am not psychic... but I do feel very strongly about it... Maybe you have suffered all these pains so that you can help others later on... maybe you will be someone who can inspire other people to fight against the wrongs done to them... I do hope you contact me... I really would like to chat with you...
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