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angel
Contributed by
vampyrekiss
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 03:45:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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each and eveyday
I wonder why
what I did to deserve you?
why do you stay?
why you put up with me
even when Im a *****
why you stay by my side
as I cry
you are like a angel
sent to me
sent to save me
from myself
to show me something to live for
the beauty in myself
I love you
and what youve made me become
my angel from above
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vampyrekiss
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2004-09-21 15:45:13]
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Re: angel
(User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 04:32:34 PM AEST
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If you don't like it I would like to see what
you want to do with this. Maybe try some different approaches to the same idea.
The you-are-my-angel theme is always a
good one. For what it is, this little poem ain't
all that bad. I think you have the right idea.
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