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Remember Today
Contributed by
nightrider
on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Terror, smoke, pain, and fear,
all now are here,
no one believes,
no one can see,
what is happening to me,
my heart is racing,
my head pounding,
this pain and hurt seem everlasting,
life is a precious thing,
but mine seems to run from me,
my breathing hurts,
i cant move,
im ready to lose,
let me go,
let me die,
i dont even want to try,
my will to live is gone,
and now my life is done.
remember me,
my face and words.
remember me,
my pain and hurt.
remember me,
remember today.
Copyright ©
nightrider
... [
2002-11-09 14:00:00]
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Re: Remember Today
(User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 04:29:30 PM AEST
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Beautiful once again
you have written such a
moving deeply sad poem
I really enjoy reading your
poetry, Thanks for sharing
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: Remember Today
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by frozensuicide on
Saturday, 16th November 2002 @ 08:23:04 AM AEST
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| hugs can save lives! people need huugs! hug a moose! this one's pretty good too. put up moooore!!! |
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Re: Remember Today
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by Yellowrose on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 11:08:31 AM AEST
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| I feel great sorrow and saddness in this poem. You do MAGNIFICENT works. Yellowrose. |
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Re: Remember Today
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by LayDownPlayDead on
Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 10:06:56 PM AEST
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| I reall like this one. It's so beautiful. |
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