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A Perfect Freak
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:02:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Pregnant with the desire
to move on.
Never looking back at what
I was before.
Looking in the mirror,
at what you've made me today.
But when I look in the mirror,
the whore is all I see.
A blackened face
looking back at me.
A dissolute interruption
in the perfection of society.
Trespassing into unknown terriotory.
This is what you've made me.
A freak of nature.
I thank you!
For all that you've done for me.........
Copyright ©
Sirena_Degana
... [
2004-09-21 19:02:38]
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Re: A Perfect Freak
(User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:36:42 PM AEST
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I really dig the beginning of this one. Pregnant with the desire and all that. The sarcastic thank you! part is a little overdone by the heart broken, but I'll overlook that and give this a high 4.4 on the Nortiscale.
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