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Without You
Contributed by
CoLD
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 08:56:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The waves wash over the shore
Just but once more
The sun sets as the night falls in
But only once more
The stars twinkle in the night sky
Just for one more time
The last minute passes
And the world stops spinning
The stars stop shining
And the waves stop crashing
This is how life would be
Without you by me.
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CoLD
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2004-09-21 20:56:45]
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Re: Without You
(User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:01:47 PM AEST
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Mr or Miss or whatever CoLD - this is a message from me to you - pick up your pen right now and write now! Please, please, please. This made your mom cry because she's got good taste. Some of these poems make me cry because they stink. This does not stink and for the second time in the night and the year I give a 5 out. I give this poem a 5 on the Nortiscale.
norticus
PS - this would be great read to jazz |
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