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Kisses Of Heaven
Contributed by
TruBlueLove
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Kisses Of Heaven
Darkness passes on my angels wing
As light pours into my hardened hear
The rebirth of my black soul has begun
Bittersweet love passes into my veins
Leaving my numb body, warm again forever
My tormented mind is now at peace
For I have found my heaven on earth
I found it in your eyes, your smile, and you embrace
Only you have touched me so deeply
And you may never fully understand
What you truly do to me
Yet in your passionate eyes
I see only the purest from of love and compassion
A gaze that pierces my very being
To read the deepest desires of my lovesick soul
And fills my heart with glee and joy
I can only pray that my eyes
Reflect the love that burning inside
I wish on every brilliant star in the heavens
That I have found my beautiful true love
And that we are each others only one
My heart sings with love that will live on for eternity
It sings to an undying compassion
That I can only pray will never come to an end
Yet with my love song sung to an angel
I cannot find the courage to tell you
All that lives in my heart and soul
So I shall pray to the heavenly stars above
That they may show you the way into my heart
To show you that in all that you do
I will forever adore you
For in you eyes I have found heaven
Nicole Cheree Meeks
September 21, 2004
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Re: Kisses Of Heaven
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:07:37 PM AEST
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I give this a 4.1 on the Nortiscale. It's a good breath of metaphor. I would change the length and shorten it. That's it.
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Re: Kisses Of Heaven
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:44:39 AM AEST
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Don't touch it!
U found your nick 'cause this is one of the most precious luv poems I''ve read.
The title jus drags one in from the git go. That
a great traite to writing.
Sorry noticus, I think it's great.
five stars from me 'cause this is not only strong but it's tender to.
I'll be waiting to read the next one,
luv, huggs, smiles, kisses from heaven,
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Re: Kisses Of Heaven
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:46:47 AM AEST
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| Wonerful poem. If it expresses all of your true feelings, as much as you can, leave it the way it is. I hope he sees the way you feel & feels the same for you......Mike |
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Re: Kisses Of Heaven
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 08:17:55 AM AEST
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| So pasionately written, so vividly beautiful and emotionally breathtaking to read such heartfelt words, I hope you have found what is obvisouly your soul mate. |
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