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Actions speak louder than words
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:02:16 PM in AEST
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Sometimes the words dont come
When I think of what to say
But I dont think you miss me
When we spend our time away
You cant say certain things
Which leads me to believe
That somewhere deep inside
Your planning how to leave
I see the things you do
Actions speak louder than words
And when you try to tell me
Your words just go unheard
Ill make it easy for you
Just say whats in your heart
If youre going to leave me
Its better in the start
I dont want to make you stay
If you dont want to be here
But when you look for me
Dont be surprised if Im not there
I spent my time just waiting
For you to clear your mind
But I dont think your looking
For the answers you must find
I hope you see things clearly
And how it all should be
Maybe then youd see
That you should have been with me
If it doesnt feel right
Then maybe it should end
Before I lose it all
Including a great friend
So tell me what you want
What you feel inside your soul
So if your going to leave
I can begin to break your hold
Because this love I feel
I dont want it to have to fade
But if you dont feel the same
Then we should go our separate ways
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:10:20 PM AEST
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Too long, and it reminds me of most of my recent girlfriends. Just a hint to the author - the moment a guy thinks you are writing this sort of thing or thinking it, he begins to lose interest. If you could keep your emotions in check and go with the flow you'd find that ever elusive love.
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 09:11:23 PM AEST
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I almost forgot-this one gets a 3 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 10:25:51 PM AEST
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| wow. well speaking from her point of view because i fit the discription in some ways. i dont tell someone how i feel afraid of the reaction, or afraid of what it does to the relationship. being open with someone is hard for me to do, because i never thought there was a reason to be open and just kept everything to myself, and its hard to break old habits. but it is possible she is planning to leave, i dont know and you dont know for sure either. ::shrugs:: i hope all goes well though. |
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 03:34:11 AM AEST
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A poem like thus never gets too long 'cause if it's wworth reading then the amount of stazas it is I'm gonna keep reading.In this I can beleive in ru luv. If u luv someone enuff to let um fly free even tho u act with each line but the luv outshines the doubts or negativity.
In each line there's not only pure luv in each line but mucho wisdom.
Very powerfull luv u have in your heart.
Peace, joy, luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 22nd September 2004 @ 07:47:00 AM AEST
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This poem isnt long at all, I have written longer, It is an emotional write with such vivid tenderness, a very clear image unfolds with each word my eyes alighted on, I am glad I was able to read, You have an awesoem talent, You have captured me with the words.
Thank you for sharing and take care always. |
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 2nd October 2004 @ 06:54:21 PM AEST
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holder this was so sad and heartwrenching I liked the write it flowed well but I dont know its so sad...hmmm...r u feeling ok? well once again a beautiful write...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Actions speak louder than words
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 12:43:15 AM AEST
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Yes they do. She has changed but its a little to late for her
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